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a poem i wrote my bf for our 1 yr.Rate this Poem
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one year
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Created on 11-23-07
a year has quickly come and gone
i can't believe it's been so long
we've been through so much, we made it through
i am so lucky that i found you
there's nobody better, no one i'd rather have
you're the only one for me, i hope you understand
what brought us together, was it luck, was it fate?
I'm just glad that i found you before it was too late
I love you so much and that ain't no lie
you're the only one for me, there is no better guy
you make me so happy, more than you will ever know
so let's stay together and let our love grow
Please Login to post comments| On December 11th 2007 AlexINTJ Said : | |
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This is much more positive than most of what I read of your work. You're very good at it. Anyway, I liked this. |
| On December 9th 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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wow. a happy poem:) lovely wording and such..hope he liked it :D |
| On November 27th 2007 KaytlynnMM Said : | |
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awww i like this one |
| On November 25th 2007 MelissaDA Said : | |
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aww..thats really sweet hun. |
| On November 24th 2007 HumanF17TH Said : | |
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aawww thats adorable |
| On November 23rd 2007 1234fukdaw0r1d Said : | |
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Wow that is pretty... Its wonderfull... He better like it... Will you comment and rate my stuff please... Itd be an honor... |
| On November 23rd 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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Very sweet. I'm sure he loved it. |
