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cant escape it

Views (114) Pain Created on 11-23-07 Flag

i walk this world alone
with no one by my side
theres nothing left to do
and nowhere left to hide

im all by myself, what should i do
please someone help me, i really have no clue
im walking in circles,  helpless, confused
i dont kow what to do to escape the abuse

someone please fine me, save me from my self
i never wanted it to be  like this, but i cant find any help
i bury my head, try to escape it
what choice do i have, im not gonna make it

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On December 16th 2007 rain2teardrops Said :
rain2teardrops This has has deffinatly made my top 5 fav of your poems.
On December 11th 2007 AlexINTJ Said :
AlexINTJ Very deep. Fark and wonderfully written. It had a very noticible atmosphere. Nice.
On December 9th 2007 California1516 Said :
California1516 woah..deeppppp!! love it tho..i like it how ur poems have a great flow to them..cuz some poems..ppl try and force them to rhyme :D
On November 27th 2007 KaytlynnMM Said :
KaytlynnMM i like
On November 26th 2007 PurpelHaze14 Said :
PurpelHaze14 i love it and can so identify with how you feel
On November 25th 2007 MelissaDA Said :
MelissaDA you have written the story of my life...terrific job hun..
On November 24th 2007 HumanF17TH Said :
HumanF17TH nice poem
On November 23rd 2007 1234fukdaw0r1d Said :
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Yeah I totally agree with ausjo...iv felt like that for the past 2 and a half months... So your not alone...
On November 23rd 2007 transgenic Said :
transgenic Nice flow, great word choice!
On November 23rd 2007 ausjo Said :
ausjo I think so many can relate to feeling alone. I hope this isn't your situation. If it is, I feel for you.