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angel of darkness |
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my suicide |
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nowhere to go |
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it's happening again |
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a final goodbye |
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over you |
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suicide |
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one more year |
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living a lie |
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what would they do? |
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invisible walls |
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no way out |
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i must hold on |
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all alone |
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unseen feelings |
cant escape it
i walk this world alone
with no one by my side
theres nothing left to do
and nowhere left to hide
im all by myself, what should i do
please someone help me, i really have no clue
im walking in circles, helpless, confused
i dont kow what to do to escape the abuse
someone please fine me, save me from my self
i never wanted it to be like this, but i cant find any help
i bury my head, try to escape it
what choice do i have, im not gonna make it
| On December 16th 2007 rain2teardrops Said : | |
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This has has deffinatly made my top 5 fav of your poems. |
| On December 11th 2007 AlexINTJ Said : | |
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Very deep. Fark and wonderfully written. It had a very noticible atmosphere. Nice. |
| On December 9th 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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woah..deeppppp!! love it tho..i like it how ur poems have a great flow to them..cuz some poems..ppl try and force them to rhyme :D |
| On November 27th 2007 KaytlynnMM Said : | |
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i like |
| On November 26th 2007 PurpelHaze14 Said : | |
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i love it and can so identify with how you feel |
| On November 25th 2007 MelissaDA Said : | |
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you have written the story of my life...terrific job hun.. |
| On November 24th 2007 HumanF17TH Said : | |
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nice poem |
| On November 23rd 2007 1234fukdaw0r1d Said : | |
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Yeah I totally agree with ausjo...iv felt like that for the past 2 and a half months... So your not alone... |
| On November 23rd 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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Nice flow, great word choice! |
| On November 23rd 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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I think so many can relate to feeling alone. I hope this isn't your situation. If it is, I feel for you. |


