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Not so innocent
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Created on 10-16-07
my innocence is bleeding through
what in the world am i going to do
i'm ashamed of myself, who i've truely become
the truth will be hidden, something must be done
i'll hide the pain so they won't see
that deep down inside i don't wanna be me
was it really supposed to be this way
s life odf wasted dreams
wish i could throw it all away
i glance towards the mirror, afraid of what i see
my emotions run wild, how can this be
i have become someone else, a liar a fake
i don't know how much more i can take
so I'll take this severed edge, put it to my skin
I'm giving up this fight, I'm never gonna win
I will drop dead, fall to the floor
my existence here will be no more
Please Login to post comments| On February 16th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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This really showcases your talent. I felt your pain as I read this. |
| On December 9th 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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i think everyone has gone thro something like this before..i like it alot |
| On November 25th 2007 MelissaDA Said : | |
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oh you don't know how often i feel this...and want to do it..great poem hun |
| On October 28th 2007 MythriS Said : | |
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ur words r very deep and there is alot of emotion in this. Its good. I, myself, write with alot about how i feel during times...and mostly its about pain. But i think most and the best poems or wateva are about sorry, or broken hearts...or wateva else. Im saying this poem is good, and ur very good at writing |
| On October 16th 2007 xXcaitlin13Xx Said : | |
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wow i really really like this. =] |
