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1st haiku ever written. what do u think?Rate this Poem
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angel of darkness |
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my suicide |
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nowhere to go |
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it's happening again |
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a final goodbye |
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over you |
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suicide |
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one more year |
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living a lie |
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what would they do? |
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invisible walls |
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no way out |
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i must hold on |
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all alone |
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unseen feelings |
the pain
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Created on 9-28-07
make it go away
the pain deep inside my soul
please just make it stop
the pain deep inside my soul
please just make it stop
Please Login to post comments| On November 25th 2007 MelissaDA Said : | |
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really good for your first. good job hun! |
| On October 6th 2007 AlexINTJ Said : | |
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Pretty good for a first one! I liked it : ) |
| On October 2nd 2007 rain2teardrops Said : | |
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Its really good:) Keep me posted! |
| On September 29th 2007 BigJhpu Said : | |
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i wish u would right longer to them i know u have so much to say |
| On September 29th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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This is really good! |
| On September 28th 2007 xxxAngelicaxxx Said : | |
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first haiku ive written. im still trying to get used to writing them. i should have more soon. |
