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what is this feeling
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Created on 9-28-07
what is this feeling
i feel deep inside
what is this feeling
that i can no longer hide
a feeling so strong and a feeling so bold
a feeling that warmed up my world so cold
this feeling surrounds me whenever you're near
maybe i'm falling in love, my dear
your always on my mind and always in my heart
before you came, i was falling apart
what is this feeling
ive never felt this before
what is this feeling thats pounding on my door
it's hear to stay, it came from above
maybe this feeling i'm feeling is love
Please Login to post comments| On November 25th 2007 MelissaDA Said : | |
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wow..that was really beautiful hun! that used to be my hope not too long ago. i'm glad you have experienced that! |
| On October 6th 2007 AlexINTJ Said : | |
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That was wonderfully written. I loved it. The rhyming didn't take over the poem...it was short and clear but very emotionally charged :) awesome. |
| On September 30th 2007 fgggfx Said : | |
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very nice |
| On September 29th 2007 BigJhpu Said : | |
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wow that is really powerful |
