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Felicity
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Created on 6-30-07
Felicity
Vast valley
stretching
far and wide
bright blue sky
wind whispers
to the grass
that moves
softly in
the quiet
breeze
©KBH
Please Login to post comments| On July 25th 2007 hardcorpschick Said : | |
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so very lovely! and the coloring of the words is fantastic! |
| On July 10th 2007 NeuroticErin Said : | |
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It was short, but still so descriptive. |
| On July 6th 2007 softballdemon Said : | |
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i agree it is very peaceful and calming |
| On July 5th 2007 ArtificialRed Said : | |
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I like it's simplicity. It's oddly calming and relaxing. |
| On July 3rd 2007 demon202 Said : | |
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very nice peacefull tone |
| On June 30th 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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oh wow..this is so short, simple, sweet, yet u can imagine everything in ur head perfectly..this is a lovely poem..nice work |
| On June 30th 2007 Bones37 Said : | |
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Very nice!! |
| On June 30th 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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Short and sweet, seems peaceful. I like the blue you have used in your poem, it adds to it. |
| On June 30th 2007 crkerwath Said : | |
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That is such a lovely poem! I love the use of color in it too- very artistic! |
| On June 30th 2007 mrskritter Said : | |
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nice work |
