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Growing Up
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Created on 6-17-07
Growing Up
Dear Mother,
I’m not a little girl anymore
I won’t run to you for cover
I’m sorry if your is heart sore
But I really need my space
I don’t need to be protected
I wish you’d get off my case
I’m sorry if you feel rejected
Don’t worry, I still love you
with all of my heart
but don’t stick to me like glue
I can take care of myself, i’m smart
I wish you’d get a clue
and learn to trust me
I’m trying to tell you I’m growing up
If only you could see
©KBH
Please Login to post comments| On June 25th 2007 ang3lofthenite Said : | |
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i knew that feeling for way to long, my rents treated me as if i were 5. it sucked. But its a great poem and you captured the feeling really well. great job. |
| On June 20th 2007 hardcorpschick Said : | |
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haha. def know that feeling |
| On June 20th 2007 ArtificialRed Said : | |
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I lke it it shows pain and simple what the daughter feels like. |
| On June 19th 2007 barbaraew Said : | |
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good job |
| On June 19th 2007 amanda710faith Said : | |
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i guess u feel like the situation sucks cuz ur mom doesnt "understand" but i consider u a very lucky girl...your mom cares. |
| On June 18th 2007 Bones37 Said : | |
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Another great one!!! |
| On June 17th 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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HOLY....that like described everything for me right there..nice work!! i love this poem |
| On June 17th 2007 cutiekirstie92 Said : | |
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WOW that is my exact thought towards my mom. Great wording and flow. Great job. |
| On June 17th 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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Moms don't like to let go and they will always worry. It is hard to watch the child that you gave birth too and nurtured grow up. I speak from experience...and if something tragic or scary has happened to your child then you hang on tighter. One of my 15 month old twins, Rebecca, just got a big bead lodged in her throat two days ago and she couldn't breath, she had blood coming out of her nose. Can you imagine the terror a parent feels? Parents hold on because they care about you...there comes a time when they have to let go and let you make your own decisions. I understand that you need room to grow into a young lady...be happy that your mom cares. I love your poem and I am sorry I wrote a book....I probably sound like your mom. |
| On June 17th 2007 DrizzleHere Said : | |
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i feel like that since i moved out my moms all cry baby like >.< good job. |
| On June 17th 2007 mrskritter Said : | |
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great job |
| On June 17th 2007 greymorning Said : | |
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it's a feeling i can relate to |
| On June 17th 2007 amptone Said : | |
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Yeah I have felt like that, props to you it's great |
