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Vampire's Kiss
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Created on 6-17-07
Vampire’s Kiss
Exotic, erotic
electrifying, petrifying
seductive kiss, from cold lips
mouth on neck, fangs become erect
metallic blood, like a flood
red and salty, warm and savory
drink it in, the pleasure begins
two puncture wounds, are left anew
for each vitcim, who always gives in
to such sweet bliss, from the vampire’s kiss
© KBH 2007
Please Login to post comments| On July 15th 2007 7unicornrings Said : | |
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i love it!!! vampires are awesome!! u rock! really kewl poem. |
| On July 15th 2007 cdmw811 Said : | |
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i like it a lot. Vampires are my favorite subject! |
| On July 1st 2007 chelsymacaroni Said : | |
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me like lots and i am an aspiaring poet and i am picky. but kisses and vampires are my fave topics so. But it is a great poem. I love the format. |
| On June 25th 2007 ang3lofthenite Said : | |
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i love it!!! |
| On June 21st 2007 grymlyn Said : | |
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short and sweet, very to the point. This attracts the morbid side of our personalities instantly. Keep up the good work! |
| On June 20th 2007 MelissaDA Said : | |
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Brilliant! |
| On June 20th 2007 hardcorpschick Said : | |
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fantastic! |
| On June 20th 2007 ArtificialRed Said : | |
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It's pretty in a frightening way. It really shows that hypnotic seduction the vampire is famous for. |
| On June 19th 2007 MizVamparee Said : | |
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whoa!!! this is awsome i tell you!!
it`s so delicious!! |
| On June 19th 2007 barbaraew Said : | |
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cool nice job |
| On June 19th 2007 gbrownstar Said : | |
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thats really cool
the vampire theme was good:) |
| On June 19th 2007 massofwebs Said : | |
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how kl is tht poem |
| On June 19th 2007 azorrozua Said : | |
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WOW ITS AMAZING! |
| On June 19th 2007 VampirWlof89 Said : | |
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I love vampires. I must say this is an great read. Thank you. |
| On June 18th 2007 monkeydee22 Said : | |
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Marvelous! It's very riveting! wow good job... I love it!
~Vampyr~ |
| On June 18th 2007 Bones37 Said : | |
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This is truly a work of art.This one has it all.
I LOVE IT!!! |
| On June 18th 2007 demon202 Said : | |
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very nice great poem |
| On June 17th 2007 cmossy2003 Said : | |
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Nice poem, truely a good poem.:) |
| On June 17th 2007 bladakesh17 Said : | |
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KICK ASS POEM I LOVED IT I LOVE VAMPIRE THEMES ITS HOTT |
| On June 17th 2007 xxlostsoul14xx Said : | |
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oops, vitcim should be VICTIM |
| On June 17th 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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wow..the imagery is good!!!! nice work |
| On June 17th 2007 takemyl1fe Said : | |
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Damn. this poem is awesome. :] |
| On June 17th 2007 lostndarkness8 Said : | |
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Good poem, I love the whole vampire thing its sexy! |
| On June 17th 2007 KristiBretz Said : | |
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Not to bad, it flowed and the taste mentioning metallic makes me think they know from experience! |
| On June 17th 2007 R0ckNRoll Said : | |
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Ahww! Awesome :D |
