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an ex friend who developed into a bitch

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Thank you,


for everything you’ve done


you’ve made me feel like shit


you’ve made me extremely tense


you’ve hurt me with every bit


of your heartless soul, & I had no defense


you’ve said I look like shrek


and that I’m too immature


you’ve made me a complete wreck


but I realize you’re weak, this I’m sure


and everything you put me through


has made me stronger everyday


I don’t care anymore, get a clue


I’m not sorry you won’t get your way


©KBH

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On July 2nd 2007 loza801 Said :
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she called u immature but shes the one that sed u looked like shrek??? darl ignore the bitch you got some chops!
On June 6th 2007 tswieberg Said :
tswieberg WOW....I felt the hurt in this poem...some people just don't know how to be nice. You are beautiful and don't let anyone ever bring you down. Great job.
On June 5th 2007 psychomama28 Said :
psychomama28 im sorry. how could anyone say these things about you!!!!
On June 5th 2007 mixedemotions3 Said :
mixedemotions3 I LOVE THIS POEM!! i feel like the same way with my dad......
On June 4th 2007 hardcorpschick Said :
hardcorpschick i love this. its powerful.
On June 4th 2007 mrskritter Said :
mrskritter nice job
On June 4th 2007 thatonegirl84 Said :
thatonegirl84 Good.
On June 3rd 2007 Lookin4TruLuv Said :
Lookin4TruLuv You look like an ogre? Wow. I think you are gorgeous. This person must not be very honest. I love this poem. The form is great! I love how you pieced it all together. It couldn't be better. I love it!
On June 3rd 2007 California1516 Said :
California1516 wow..nice work! i love it :D
On June 3rd 2007 NeutralR1 Said :
NeutralR1 that is great way to express yourself..
On June 3rd 2007 f2daerg2i2e Said :
f2daerg2i2e the poems pretty good but some parts jus dont fit...you hav really good potential though!!
On June 3rd 2007 NeuroticErin Said :
NeuroticErin O..o It's great, but just O..o
On June 3rd 2007 ThisIsTheDay Said :
ThisIsTheDay awwl...i know how you feel! this is really good and you are really pretty [you don't look like shrek...] great job! -Lozer™
On June 3rd 2007 MsKeDave Said :
MsKeDave Cute
On June 3rd 2007 demon202 Said :
demon202 Bitches!! well atleast this is only making u stronger good poem
On June 3rd 2007 guffa78 Said :
guffa78 great work!!!...some people just aren't worth the air they breathe...it is wrong to be mean...
On June 3rd 2007 amptone Said :
amptone good job girl
On June 3rd 2007 chickenbroth Said :
chickenbroth damn right!!! Great job this is some of the shit that happens every day, alot of heartache. You put it into words well.
On June 3rd 2007 Jbelled24 Said :
Jbelled24 gppd job!! You tell 'em
On June 3rd 2007 cindy2000 Said :
cindy2000 luv it!it's so true!
On June 3rd 2007 cindy2000 Said :
cindy2000 luv it!it's so true!
On June 3rd 2007 marlana79 Said :
marlana79 heck yes. If someone likes to hurt other people it is because they are weak. Not the people they hurt. I completely agree.