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To Whom It May Concern,

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To Whom It May Concern,


I am insane

I can’t get past

all this horrid pain

do you think I’ll last

I’m falling apart

I’m slipping away

Though I’m smart

I can’t find my way


I’m in a thousand pieces

A puzzle never to be solved

too many un-fixable creases

my problems will never be resolved

I’m breaking down more these days

I am sick of all this shit

I am in a foggy haze

Is it possible to get rid of it


I’m not taking my meds

but I need help fast

I’m alone on my bed

dwelling on the past

I don’t want to cry

I’m sick of being weak

Is it better if I die

I think while falling to my knees


I am completely broken

never to be fixed

I don’t care what I’ve spoken

I don’t care if I live


Sincerely,

    © KBH

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On August 26th 2007 poet77 Said :
poet77 very powerful, amazing that you are into poetry and are this good at your age, not that i should be talking :)
On July 29th 2007 labeba26 Said :
labeba26 i can totally relate luv it!
On July 28th 2007 AikoSaru Said :
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sweet, i like it. sad but still awsome
On June 4th 2007 hardcorpschick Said :
hardcorpschick wow. made my chest hurt.
On June 1st 2007 marlana79 Said :
marlana79 Wow sounds like your having a bad day. I love this poem:)
On May 31st 2007 thatonegirl84 Said :
thatonegirl84 This is an amazing poem. Very well worded.
On May 30th 2007 ThisIsTheDay Said :
ThisIsTheDay w0w this is great!!! i wuv it! -Lozer™
On May 29th 2007 ginoluver Said :
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awww! this is hawesome [w/ an h!] seems like...wow. words cant expalin...luv it!
On May 29th 2007 sma333 Said :
sma333 i love it!!! sad but strong awsum job! ~♥Shelli♥~
On May 28th 2007 amptone Said :
amptone Hey, that's pretty good, I like the title as well.
On May 28th 2007 ArtificialRed Said :
ArtificialRed I like the way you formatted it. Reminds me of an author I liked. I like the sadess in it, but I also like how you said you don't want to cry. It's much different from the sad poems where they always cry.
On May 27th 2007 imahappygoober Said :
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o my goodness. this is very very good. i really like it
On May 27th 2007 xXUrSoRadXx Said :
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wow that is good.
On May 27th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said :
xxcassiejayxx very pretty
On May 27th 2007 barbaraew Said :
barbaraew well written
On May 27th 2007 Savedbyalamb Said :
Savedbyalamb wow, sad. but rly good
On May 27th 2007 dureall Said :
dureall Awsome awsome way to awsome......wow!
On May 27th 2007 tswieberg Said :
tswieberg Awesome poem
On May 27th 2007 demon202 Said :
demon202 very sadening poem masterfully done one of the better poems i have
On May 27th 2007 guffa78 Said :
guffa78 great, great job!!
On May 27th 2007 chickenbroth Said :
chickenbroth wow, this is truely one of my favorites! The content was fabulous and the layout of that only added, wonderful job!!