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Created on 5-27-07
I'm running through a maze
which is my messed up mind
I can not find myself
can you show me a sign
I turn left, right, always making faults
I'm an enormous psychotic mess
that should be locked up in a vault
this maze is creating too much stress
I can not take it anymore
the maze has gotten to me
my legs are extremely sore
I give up, I'm no longer me
I think I will just sit and wait
not caring if I will secludedly die
maybe that's my only escape
to tell this maze it's final goodbye
© KBH
which is my messed up mind
I can not find myself
can you show me a sign
I turn left, right, always making faults
I'm an enormous psychotic mess
that should be locked up in a vault
this maze is creating too much stress
I can not take it anymore
the maze has gotten to me
my legs are extremely sore
I give up, I'm no longer me
I think I will just sit and wait
not caring if I will secludedly die
maybe that's my only escape
to tell this maze it's final goodbye
© KBH
Please Login to post comments| On April 27th 2008 Nettylouise Said : | |
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I love it. I can feel it. |
| On May 28th 2007 ArtificialRed Said : | |
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I find it very well done. And who gives a crap if you're emo or not. I don't think that an apropriate comment on a poem. Can't we forget labels for once people? Can we not just try to connect with the poem? |
| On May 27th 2007 ANHughes1312 Said : | |
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ARE U EMO!? |
| On May 27th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said : | |
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not as good as too whom it may concern like durreal said but it is good |
| On May 27th 2007 dureall Said : | |
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Not as good as "to whom it may cercern" but still a great job! |
| On May 27th 2007 thee1phantom Said : | |
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really good job |
| On May 27th 2007 demon202 Said : | |
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ur newer one is better but still a good poem |
| On May 27th 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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You must be writing about LIFE....I can relate....good poem |
| On May 27th 2007 guffa78 Said : | |
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i feel like a physhotic mess alot!!! great poem! |
| On May 27th 2007 chickenbroth Said : | |
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I really like this, great job! |
