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Break Down

Views (129) Pain Created on 5-20-07 Flag

Break Down


I can’t speak

I can’t rest

I can’t eat

I can’t be best


I can’t be loved

I can’t breathe

I can’t be solved

I can’t leave


I can’t forget

I can’t believe

I can’t regret

I can’t be me


I can’t feel

I can’t have hope

I can’t be surreal

I can’t cope


©KBH

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On May 21st 2007 blah2blah Said :
blah2blah The structure reminds me of my poem "Just Run". I really like this poem, especially the rhyming and the third stanza, for some reason thats the one that really caught my eye.
On May 20th 2007 tswieberg Said :
tswieberg Awesome I love it.
On May 20th 2007 drowningnlove Said :
drowningnlove really well done, I love it!!
On May 20th 2007 Purp7eFi7th Said :
Purp7eFi7th aawww.... it sucks to feel stuck : / ... lovely poem
On May 20th 2007 guffa78 Said :
guffa78 this is really great
On May 20th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said :
xxcassiejayxx i like this... i love the rhyming even though they are all 'i can't...'