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ermm, yeah...life is stressful

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Stressed

Views (153) Pain Created on 5-12-07 Flag

I'm spiraling
down
down
down
Into a dark fate

I'm going to
drown
drown
drown
In all of this hate

I wish I was
loved
loved
loved
for once in my life

I'm going to
break
break
break
with all of this strife

©KBH

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On November 6th 2007 transgenic Said :
transgenic I like that you repeated the verbs like that.
On May 12th 2007 DrizzleHere Said :
DrizzleHere i didn't like this one to much, seems like it was written to quickly without a lot of thought.
On May 12th 2007 tswieberg Said :
tswieberg Love is out there...you just have to find it!