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When Two Lovers Meet
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Created on 9-2-07
His gentle hand reaches up
and lightly strokes her cheek
a sigh escapes her lips
that sensation she wants to keep
They gaze long and deep
into each other's eyes
love is what they see
which comes to no surprise
He runs his strong fingers
softly along her jaw line
she trembles at that sensual touch
with her hands, his face she finds
Their lips hesitantly meet
with a longed, tender kiss
everything around them is a haze
every second together is bliss
He knows just what to do
to make her go insane
he playfully bites her lower lip
without causing her any pain
Passion finally envelops them
they're each other's heart's desire
they don't want to leave each other
the bedroom is where they'll retire
©2007 KBH
and lightly strokes her cheek
a sigh escapes her lips
that sensation she wants to keep
They gaze long and deep
into each other's eyes
love is what they see
which comes to no surprise
He runs his strong fingers
softly along her jaw line
she trembles at that sensual touch
with her hands, his face she finds
Their lips hesitantly meet
with a longed, tender kiss
everything around them is a haze
every second together is bliss
He knows just what to do
to make her go insane
he playfully bites her lower lip
without causing her any pain
Passion finally envelops them
they're each other's heart's desire
they don't want to leave each other
the bedroom is where they'll retire
©2007 KBH
*Note- Funny thing is, I've never been kissed or been in a relationship, so this all came from my imagination & I got a little reference from a friend. ha.*
Please Login to post comments| On July 28th 2008 allizawesome Said : | |
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nice =] |
| On March 13th 2008 oceanbluebook Said : | |
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LOL this is good... good reference lol |
| On October 17th 2007 lostmybaby15 Said : | |
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dude this rocks hardcore abs |
| On September 10th 2007 DrizzleHere Said : | |
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nicely done. specially for no exp. |
| On September 6th 2007 monkeydee22 Said : | |
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This is amazing! wow and no experience of the subject good visionary skills.
~Vampyr~ |
| On September 4th 2007 mrskritter Said : | |
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great work |
| On September 3rd 2007 NeuroticErin Said : | |
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This is definitely my favorite out of all of yours. I mean, I'm like tearing up for no reason. It's not even sad, but it made me tear up. Thanks, babe, you're making me cry. xP But seriously, this is amazing. |
| On September 2nd 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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wow..good imagery...i like it alot! |
| On September 2nd 2007 gorjuzkisses Said : | |
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wow this is great i love it |
| On September 2nd 2007 cloud132475860 Said : | |
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Lol well your friend gave you good reference cause you hit the nail on the head pretty much |
| On September 2nd 2007 J3w3llC82890 Said : | |
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wow, ur a verry talented write!
its amazzing how youve never been in a relationship && still got it to seam so real!
thats extremly amazing!
if you have time, please come check out my poems. theres no need to, only if you want.
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| On September 2nd 2007 staziebob Said : | |
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ahhhh yup thats how my best friend tyler kisses me=] |
| On September 2nd 2007 undiie Said : | |
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Perfectly said. If only all kisses had that magic... Go out there and get someone to kiss, yo. =] |
| On September 2nd 2007 Xpoetxgurlx Said : | |
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this is absolutly amazing =D ive never been kissed either and this makes me feel like im watching a movie. lol im just like..."whoa. thats awesome" XD |
| On September 2nd 2007 bambambaby1000 Said : | |
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Very nice,, your imagination is very correct :).. you've got talent!! |
| On September 2nd 2007 thekillerheart Said : | |
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I understand that you havent had this because most of my poetry i dont have first hand experience.. but its a great flow, and I said wow when i read you havent been in a relationship because your pretty |
| On September 2nd 2007 Vestque Said : | |
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WOW! Great. I love how your poems are stories. |
| On September 2nd 2007 alexia66 Said : | |
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yea awesome poem, the imagery is great. adn wow if u wrote that without goin through it...thats great talent. lol |
| On September 2nd 2007 earindle Said : | |
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Awsome poem, really well written, I love it ! Your work is great! |
| On September 2nd 2007 CodyLovesKim12 Said : | |
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You are truly amazing! This poem is very good!! |
| On September 2nd 2007 NaomiElizabeth Said : | |
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nice poem! |
| On September 2nd 2007 Mcbouie08 Said : | |
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fro no relationship or anything u r really good keep it up!!! |
| On September 2nd 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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For imagination, you hit the nail on the head! This is an awesome poem. I love it!! |
