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Shattered

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Shattered


I am all alone

sliding down the wall

shattered by these thoughts

I curl up in a ball


Tears well in my eyes

my body starts to shake

I go completely numb

then comes a splitting headache


The sobbing starts

I’m gasping for breath

my shoulders shudder

until no tears are left


sitting on the floor

i wipe up my tears

if only i could sleep

through these horrible years


©KBH 

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On September 8th 2007 SweetDeath26 Said :
SweetDeath26 Wonderful..
On August 24th 2007 undiie Said :
undiie This is amazing! Grrrreat choice of words. =]
On August 5th 2007 wrustymay Said :
wrustymay O_O this is SOOOO good! im speachless! when i was reading this i couldnt help but think of me. i'v felt this way so many times before. this poem is put together so nice. it flows so well. I LOVE IT!
On August 5th 2007 DrizzleHere Said :
DrizzleHere nice choice of words, very good display of vacabulary, another good piece of work.
On August 3rd 2007 spasm01 Said :
spasm01 love it,and your preaching to the choir,but i think youd miss a lot more good things,than the bad. though its still tempting,lol