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Pressure
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Created on 12-30-07
Pressure Weighing down upon me heavily,I feel it surrounding me daily.I try not to give in,But it seems too hard to win.If I can’t be perfect, I think I am nobody,And I must follow them to be somebody.Then when I feel I have finally succeeded,To do, and have, everything I needed,Once again the pressure surrounds me,But this time it won’t win, and I will be free!
Please Login to post comments| On January 5th 2008 lisaljb Said : | |
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I can relate to this poem also, pressure, peer pressure, agh! Well done! |
| On January 1st 2008 nairad92 Said : | |
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There are some parts that need tunning, but over-all it is pretty good. If you are describing yourself I know that feeling well. |
