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Don't Give Up #2 |
Don't Give Up #2
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Created on 7-27-07
When you feel like you're all alone
Like no one cares
Don't give up
Because there's always a crack of sunlight
No matter how cloudy the day seems to be
There's always hope
There's always someone there to help you through the bad times
Because that is life
Full of bad but also good moments
So just be strong, don't let others push you around
And most important of all
Don't give up!
Please Login to post comments| On July 28th 2007 Javellef Said : | |
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What you say in your poem is true. Nice work! |
| On July 27th 2007 Tigga16 Said : | |
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Sounds simular to my b/f's poem "Our Love Will Last Forever" and yeah your poem is very good |
| On July 27th 2007 lisajoann88 Said : | |
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very good! inspirational! |
| On July 27th 2007 xoxdanicaxox Said : | |
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Hey what do you all think of this? |
