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You seem so far away now

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Fade Away

Views (40) Pain Created on 6-20-07 Flag

I sink lower into the water

Trying to wash away all that's not right

As memories turn into tear

The water turns them into ashes

 

I reach for the bottle one last time

I did my best to drink you away

But now I drink for courage

The courage to sink deeper, the courage to end the pain

 

You seem so far away now

As the porclain bowl pulls me closer

I feel the warmth of it's embrase

It's funny, Iv'e never felt safer..

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On August 9th 2007 xoneslowdance Said :
xoneslowdance Alright wellI guess I'll explain myself.. I'm talking about drownding.. The porclain bowl is the tub. anything else not make sence to anybody? And just to let you know you have to think aobut real poetry Good poems make you think.. they leave you wondering. Go read a doctor susess book Flutebabe!
On June 20th 2007 FluteBabe2010 Said :
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this poem really sucked I mean it didn't make any freakin sense