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Fade Away |
Fade Away
I sink lower into the water
Trying to wash away all that's not right
As memories turn into tear
The water turns them into ashes
I reach for the bottle one last time
I did my best to drink you away
But now I drink for courage
The courage to sink deeper, the courage to end the pain
You seem so far away now
As the porclain bowl pulls me closer
I feel the warmth of it's embrase
It's funny, Iv'e never felt safer..
| On August 9th 2007 xoneslowdance Said : | |
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Alright wellI guess I'll explain myself..
I'm talking about drownding..
The porclain bowl is the tub.
anything else not make sence to anybody?
And just to let you know you have to think aobut real poetry
Good poems make you think..
they leave you wondering.
Go read a doctor susess book Flutebabe! |
| On June 20th 2007 FluteBabe2010 Said : | |
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this poem really sucked I mean it didn't make any freakin sense |


