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Losing You
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Created on 4-28-07
Losing You
A day will end
a rule will bend
but my heart will always be true
it will not quake
and will not shake
but losing you will make it break
and all the pain i could not take
tears will fall to the floor
as i watch you walkout my door
all the pain i can take no more
cry all night and cry all day
and pray the pain goes away
in the hall pass you bye
and hold back the urge to cry
think of the times
the good and the bad
and try my hardest
not to be sad
all the pain i try to hide
is causing me to die inside
you'll never know how much i care
let you see how i feel i wouldn't dare
there's nothing left of me and you
but still my heart will always be true
A day will end
a rule will bend
but my heart will always be true
it will not quake
and will not shake
but losing you will make it break
and all the pain i could not take
tears will fall to the floor
as i watch you walkout my door
all the pain i can take no more
cry all night and cry all day
and pray the pain goes away
in the hall pass you bye
and hold back the urge to cry
think of the times
the good and the bad
and try my hardest
not to be sad
all the pain i try to hide
is causing me to die inside
you'll never know how much i care
let you see how i feel i wouldn't dare
there's nothing left of me and you
but still my heart will always be true
Please Login to post comments| On June 20th 2007 cloud132475860 Said : | |
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Man you have some serious talent that is nice |
| On May 1st 2007 chrissey08h2 Said : | |
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wow.. another great poem.. u have real talent.. wow.. i think ur one of my fav poets hahaha.. ur really good and the poem i love the rhyme in it. |
| On April 28th 2007 mnl13 Said : | |
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hey i like this its HOT!!! it reminds me of me and my ex. . . but its way good |
