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The Unhappiness Of Dreams
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Created on 12-20-07
While darkness reigns upon this day... My sight sees nothing ,but black and gray... All I hear is the rhythm around... And my mind just earsing without a sound... Then my wishes start to appear... As all my fears vanish into thin air... With dreams of fairytales... With dreams of talll tales... All mixed liked individuals... But as awakening I see all once again... Relizing that all my wishes never really came true...Relizizng I was just unconsious... From a terrible nightmare
Please Login to post comments| On February 22nd 2008 locachoclate Said : | |
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wow this is a realllllly good poem.......great |
| On January 8th 2008 evildarkness13 Said : | |
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i like it |
| On December 26th 2007 TresMechas Said : | |
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very good!
I love it!
~*nina*~ |
| On December 20th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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Great word choice and rhythm, I love it! |
