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This was a poem i wrote for a pictureRate this Poem
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You Said |
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A PLACE |
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No More Thinking That I'm In Love |
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Guardian Angel |
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Roses and Violets |
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Without YOU |
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Unknown;Unsolved |
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Think of you |
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The Unhappiness Of Dreams |
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The Hero Of My lIfe |
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Wall Fallen |
Without YOU
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Created on 12-5-07
Roses Red
Violets Blue
I am in a deep depression
because of you
with the wind being my sorrow
and the rain being my tears
with the flower breaking
with my feelings fading
with all becoming untrue
So just pinch me
Because I'm getting tired of this once dream
turning like a ferris wheel into a terrible nightmare
and back and forth in a cycle
That has you missing then has you found
That has me wishing then has me laughing
That has me and you together then me and you so unfound
That has you here to comfort
to love
to tell me it's all going to be right again
But yet I still lay here in the bed
And still dream this dream and nightmare
Till someone that I can love more then you
Comes and awakens me from this deep trance
Please Login to post comments| On December 10th 2007 ThisIsTheDay Said : | |
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Wow. This is beautiful. The beginning is soo captivating-I just had to keep reading! I know how it feels, I can identify with this poem very well. I love the imagery yew used, and this is just amazing. Yew have a great talent-never stop writing. =3 Love, |
