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idk i felt like it...isnt it sad?Rate this Poem
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The Silent Wolf |
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Created on 9-16-07
My scream of pain hung in the air
Life had become too much to bear
The silver knife had flashed
Across my wrist the blood had splashed
The terror had quite torn my heart
It would always stay apart
My life was fading fast before me
Leaving light so far behind me
Falling down the endless tunnel
Spinning down the deathly funnel
And then i relaxed and floated
...into space.
Please Login to post comments| On December 8th 2007 nlis2kool Said : | |
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Pretty Sweet. But the End into space just doesn't fit the rest of the poem.Hey its your poem. And I relaxed and floated. In my blood that was loaded. Sorry I just thought of it. Well good job anyway. |
| On September 17th 2007 xlollipopgurlx Said : | |
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aww shucks :) |
| On September 17th 2007 fraggot Said : | |
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nice poem, itz sumthn i think everyone can relate to...emo or not. |
| On September 17th 2007 pnkchc06 Said : | |
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I like this.. I can relate. |
| On September 16th 2007 xlollipopgurlx Said : | |
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thank ya |
| On September 16th 2007 killerXmacky13 Said : | |
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hey i really like it
its pretty kool |
