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Created on 6-13-07
I watch her lay awake at night,
See the tears roll from her eyes.
I see her look in the mirror with frieght,
Frustrated she doesnt hear my cries.
Sadly I watch her bleed her sorrow,
Her self distruction makes me weak.
She'll barely hang on until tomorrow,
Her chances of recovery are meak.
I shout&&scream for her to cease,
She finally gives herself up to sleep.
But the intensity of her nightmares increase,
Seeing all this pain I mearly weep.
She tosses&&turns in aggony,
The medication hasn't worked once more.
She only wants to be loved you see,
Not get her heart ripped&&shown the door.
It's all her fault she can't say sorry enough,
In the end she'll pay the cost.
She's giving up on this life it's just to tough,
You know when you can't save yourself you've lost.
See the tears roll from her eyes.
I see her look in the mirror with frieght,
Frustrated she doesnt hear my cries.
Sadly I watch her bleed her sorrow,
Her self distruction makes me weak.
She'll barely hang on until tomorrow,
Her chances of recovery are meak.
I shout&&scream for her to cease,
She finally gives herself up to sleep.
But the intensity of her nightmares increase,
Seeing all this pain I mearly weep.
She tosses&&turns in aggony,
The medication hasn't worked once more.
She only wants to be loved you see,
Not get her heart ripped&&shown the door.
It's all her fault she can't say sorry enough,
In the end she'll pay the cost.
She's giving up on this life it's just to tough,
You know when you can't save yourself you've lost.
Please Login to post comments| On June 13th 2007 PoeticPang Said : | |
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ouch..... wow,,,,, wait,, are u writing this thru third person view about urself or of someone else?.......... it's really great any way..... sugoy... |
