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Created on 6-13-07
Troubled, distressed&&broken,
I cant take it any longer.
Unhappy, enraged&&defeated,
Wishing I was stronger.
Furious, discusted&&aggravated,
Feeling usless&&unneeded.
Irritated&&frustrated,
Expectations never heeded.
Miserable, weakened &&damaged,
I wish to be better.
Hated, lost&&forgotten,
Remember my last letter....
I cant take it any longer.
Unhappy, enraged&&defeated,
Wishing I was stronger.
Furious, discusted&&aggravated,
Feeling usless&&unneeded.
Irritated&&frustrated,
Expectations never heeded.
Miserable, weakened &&damaged,
I wish to be better.
Hated, lost&&forgotten,
Remember my last letter....
Please Login to post comments| On June 13th 2007 undiie Said : | |
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Niice. |
| On June 13th 2007 milolover36 Said : | |
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WOW. GREAT poem... I can really relate. LOVE IT!!! |
| On June 13th 2007 softballdemon Said : | |
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It's wonderful. Really describes the feeling |
| On June 13th 2007 PoeticPang Said : | |
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"useless",,,"disgusted",,,, it's harsh,,,, i do like the adjectives u use to describe the feelings tho,,,, really well put and expressed out,,,, idk about the title tho,,, is it all evolved around a certain emotion?..... a certain bad feeling?....... |
