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The stars dont seem as bright tonight,
Either way Ill wish with all my might.
That tomorrow I wont have to cry,
I wont have to question how or why.
No one loves me this I know,
I dont understand why I question it though.
The stars they arent as bright tonight,
So I wont wish on them with might.
I will let them be&&maybe tomorrow,
Some shine&&gleam they will borrow.
So they glow with the power they used to,
Then I will wish again I had you.
Either way Ill wish with all my might.
That tomorrow I wont have to cry,
I wont have to question how or why.
No one loves me this I know,
I dont understand why I question it though.
The stars they arent as bright tonight,
So I wont wish on them with might.
I will let them be&&maybe tomorrow,
Some shine&&gleam they will borrow.
So they glow with the power they used to,
Then I will wish again I had you.
| On June 13th 2007 PoeticPang Said : | |
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what's with the "&&"s?????........... other than that,, it's really beautifully put,,, i like the resemblance u make of stars and love(?)...... |


