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Created on 6-13-07
A rope from a tree,
A slit across the wrist?
Can't you be original,
Give it a twist?
Take to many pills,
Or blow out your brain?
Which will you choose,
Which is less pain?
"I'll miss you", I'll say,
The motions I'll go threw.
Tell you it's not the only way,
Tell you I love you.
You will do what you wish,
So what is the use?
I just hope you go easily,
&&The ropes not to loose.
I'll cry for my loss,
For you were my friend.
I'm sorry you felt so horrible,
That your only way out, was your life to end.
Please Login to post comments| On June 13th 2007 PoeticPang Said : | |
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"take too many pills",,,,, wow,,, it's really great,,, i like the ideas and options u give,,, ...... the ending is pretty deep,,, i kinda get it,,, in a way,,, reminds me of someone,,,,,,,,,, it's really good tho,,,, great job~~~~~~Pang |
| On June 13th 2007 Jush Said : | |
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i like it :P |
