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Tears Of The Innocent

Views (215) Anger Created on 5-2-07 Flag
Tears of the innocent
Beg for mercy
I'm bathing in a pool of your blood
Eternal hatred
Intentional suffering
Blood spattered walls
Killing without meaning
Fueled by the cries of the weak
Hopeless misery
Sacrificial paradise
Unforgettable...unforgivable
Euphoria of pain
Rejected from hell
Unheard cries for help
Vengeance from beneath the grave
Addicted to blood
Saying no with a knife
Where to hide the body?
She screams, I laugh
Unable to forgive
The Damned
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On May 9th 2007 puckettn67 Said :
puckettn67 such rhythm yet so simple and elegant. kudos to you
On May 2nd 2007 Paul4379 Said :
Paul4379 why is it fueled by the tears of the weak?
On May 2nd 2007 penguingirl129 Said :
penguingirl129 it makes me smile. i like it =)
On May 2nd 2007 Malicexxx Said :
Malicexxx it's kind of like some of the stuff i write... i mean, not as good, well i think... people tell me i can write, and my mom wants me to be a poet, but you have skills, and most people dont.. keep it going, it's really good
On May 2nd 2007 Pushpop09 Said :
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I used to know somebody who wrote just like you. Everytime I read his stuff, it made me cry. You write...well...you write just like him. I feel as if I know you because of your writing. Regardless, you are very talented. Only the best writers can take thier thoughts and make it worth reading that it touches the soul. Sometimes touching hearts and souls that people didn't think existed anymore. Keep writing. Much love, Audrea Mosley
On May 2nd 2007 KimykoeKiani Said :
KimykoeKiani wow thats very deep