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Empty Desires

Views (101) Anger Created on 3-19-07 Flag
Violence is not enough
This bloodlust consumes me
My muscles tense as her screams enter my mind
Tearing the delicate flesh from her body
Blood covers my hands
I bathe in her agony,
consume her despair
No mercy for the weak
I must have more
The cold steel penetrates deeper
Shredding her organs
Slicing her arteries
Crimson stains on my shirt
I whisper in her ear
I taste her sweet blood
My carnal desires have been fulfilled
For now....
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On May 9th 2007 puckettn67 Said :
puckettn67 this is beautiful. you put such detail into the emotion depicted. its very good
On May 5th 2007 penguingirl129 Said :
penguingirl129 hm. i thought several scenes like this... you put it into words so beautifully.
On April 2nd 2007 KKKonfederacy Said :
KKKonfederacy My god, your bloodlust feeds the anger within me... Your poem is ingenius, you need to help me write my suicide note as my body leaves this prison we call earth
On April 1st 2007 jewells716 Said :
jewells716 that's horrible. just horrible...... *shakes my head* you need to be put away somewhere.....
On March 28th 2007 Britt4893 Said :
Britt4893 OMG!! i love it!!! i do! awsome!!!
On March 24th 2007 crazytrashy Said :
crazytrashy i LOVE your poem, so sensual full of lust god, id love for you to bathe in my blood so unfulfilling...
On March 19th 2007 emotaz Said :
emotaz ha... and i thought i was a freak! wow... talk about homicidal! your the most retarded, untalented, repulsive, unintellegnt, and did i mention ugly thing i have ever heard of!