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The Assassin |
Love Can Be So Deadly
After all this time that my heart was filled with such hate
With a wicked grin i pulled out my knife
My mind in a pychotic state
As i walked so silently to your home, i thought of all the times we shared
And my anger grew
I realized how much you never cared
No longer was any mercy in my mind stored
I opened your door and looked upon your face
The one i had once adored
I made it slow and painful
I stabbed and slashed until my rage was gone
But then guilt took over, and i became tearful
And as i clutched your body, i cried for the life in your eyes i could not see
So with that i kissed your forehead
And i turned my blade on me
| On September 6th 2008 xXkinkykikiXx Said : | |
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I don't think that anyone should even have the right to comment my poems these days, because they hardly even understand their meaning/purpose/what they're about. |
| On August 4th 2008 Alli684 Said : | |
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This is really good! |
| On July 28th 2007 naenae765 Said : | |
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I love this as well as the other people who commented, you are really good. keep writing! |
| On June 18th 2007 rockergirl929 Said : | |
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this is reallly good....can u please comment myne.i'm new and hav 2 poems.there myne.kinda depressing but yea.but you poem is very good.!!!!:) |
| On April 14th 2007 lovez2play Said : | |
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OMFG I LOVE THIS!!! |


