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Love Can Be So Deadly

Views (203) Tragedy Created on 4-14-07 Flag

After all this time that my heart was filled with such hate

With a wicked grin i pulled out my knife

My mind in a pychotic state

As i walked so silently to your home, i thought of all the times we shared

And my anger grew

I realized how much you never cared

No longer was any mercy in my mind stored

I opened your door and looked upon your face

The one i had once adored

I made it slow and painful

I stabbed and slashed until my rage was gone

But then guilt took over, and i became tearful

And as i clutched your body, i cried for the life in your eyes i could not see

So with that i kissed your forehead

And i turned my blade on me 

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On September 6th 2008 xXkinkykikiXx Said :
xXkinkykikiXx I don't think that anyone should even have the right to comment my poems these days, because they hardly even understand their meaning/purpose/what they're about.
On August 4th 2008 Alli684 Said :
Alli684 This is really good!
On July 28th 2007 naenae765 Said :
naenae765 I love this as well as the other people who commented, you are really good. keep writing!
On June 18th 2007 rockergirl929 Said :
rockergirl929 this is reallly good....can u please comment myne.i'm new and hav 2 poems.there myne.kinda depressing but yea.but you poem is very good.!!!!:)
On April 14th 2007 lovez2play Said :
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OMFG I LOVE THIS!!!