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in case u dont get it, the guy is a vampRate this Poem
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The Deadly Kiss
With his silver eyes hers met
She fell in love
She became his companion, his little pet
He was dangerous, but she did not know
This feeling of hers had blinded her
Wherever he went is where she would go
One night in romantic bliss
He wished to have her tender flesh
So on her neck he planted his deadly kiss
But she did not scream, she did not cry
For he made it so sweet
But soon he broke his kiss, for it was not his wish for her to die
He looked at her and saw no fear
Only passion, only love
This human girl he so tightly embraced, he found it comforting to have her so near
| On September 6th 2008 xXkinkykikiXx Said : | |
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I don't think that anyone should even have the right to comment my poems these days, because they hardly even understand their meaning/purpose/what they're about. |
| On August 4th 2008 Alli684 Said : | |
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I like it! |
| On March 27th 2008 xiara98 Said : | |
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WelL I ThInK ItS EMo |
| On July 23rd 2007 soothmysoul Said : | |
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ummmm that was different but in a way really romantic |
| On May 29th 2007 thestrongeone Said : | |
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that was good - very good. Look at mine? |
| On May 29th 2007 Godmessanger13 Said : | |
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It's good. That in my opinion is great. |
| On May 12th 2007 KAMart Said : | |
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Lovly |
| On April 15th 2007 Inuyasha1lover Said : | |
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awww! that was strange in a cute way!!! Yeay!!! ^_^ |
| On April 14th 2007 milolover36 Said : | |
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so what? Is the dude a vampire or something? |


