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in case u dont get it, the guy is a vamp

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The Deadly Kiss

Views (272) Love Created on 4-14-07 Flag

With his silver eyes hers met

She fell in love

She became his companion, his little pet

He was dangerous, but she did not know

This feeling of hers had blinded her

Wherever he went is where she would go

One night in romantic bliss

He wished to have her tender flesh

So on her neck he planted his deadly kiss 

But she did not scream, she did not cry

For he made it so sweet

But soon he broke his kiss, for it was not his wish for her to die

He looked at her and saw no fear

Only passion, only love

This human girl he so tightly embraced, he found it comforting to have her so near 

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On September 6th 2008 xXkinkykikiXx Said :
xXkinkykikiXx I don't think that anyone should even have the right to comment my poems these days, because they hardly even understand their meaning/purpose/what they're about.
On August 4th 2008 Alli684 Said :
Alli684 I like it!
On March 27th 2008 xiara98 Said :
xiara98 WelL I ThInK ItS EMo
On July 23rd 2007 soothmysoul Said :
soothmysoul ummmm that was different but in a way really romantic
On May 29th 2007 thestrongeone Said :
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that was good - very good. Look at mine?
On May 29th 2007 Godmessanger13 Said :
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It's good. That in my opinion is great.
On May 12th 2007 KAMart Said :
KAMart Lovly
On April 15th 2007 Inuyasha1lover Said :
Inuyasha1lover awww! that was strange in a cute way!!! Yeay!!! ^_^
On April 14th 2007 milolover36 Said :
milolover36 so what? Is the dude a vampire or something?