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Fear

Views (241) Fear Created on 4-14-07 Flag

You admit, you feel it sometimes

Fear

You cannot ignore it, it is a normal thing

You tense up, youre nervous

Fear, you feel its sting

Cold sweat runs down your back, you cant help it, you panic inside

You just want to run

You feel the need to hide 

But your feet are glued to the spot in which you stand....

Youre saved at the last minute

Someone grabbes your shaking hand 

 

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On September 6th 2008 xXkinkykikiXx Said :
xXkinkykikiXx I don't think that anyone should even have the right to comment my poems these days, because they hardly even understand their meaning/purpose/what they're about.
On June 11th 2008 karmasakilla Said :
karmasakilla love the first half but when i reached the end it kinda lost its meaning. but its still good.
On July 8th 2007 fallenxxseeker Said :
fallenxxseeker you shouldnt have saved him, it makes the drama go away...anyway, I liked it
On May 29th 2007 Godmessanger13 Said :
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It was good at the start, but the end wasn.t good. You can't even express true fear. So, you shouldn.t try.
On May 8th 2007 juwa Said :
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IT SEEMS IT NEEDS BIT MORE OF A ENDING......
On April 14th 2007 milolover36 Said :
milolover36 Wow, great wording. I loved it!