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As the saints go marching
In the grand parade,
She just sits there watching
Her life float away.
How can she let this happen?
How can she just not see,
The things that are affecting
Her originality.
Words cause her pain
She consumes like air.
She has nothing left to gain
Because nothing is fair.
Why is all this happening?
She wonders till this day,
Things come and go
But this seems to stay.
All the things that made her happy
Make her sad and blue.
Depression comes more and more
And insecurity too.
She tries to keep it all inside
To appear as a normal child,
But all she does is try to hide
From what she is and how she feels.
-Makenzie ( This is not me)
| On July 21st 2008 MCRsLover Said : | |
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awesome!! |
| On July 7th 2008 JAiDyLeE Said : | |
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Great poem. Thats a cool eye too. |
| On July 6th 2008 tibbskidoo Said : | |
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that is a cool eye tho! and the poem is good too ;) |
| On July 5th 2008 xXkenzieXz Said : | |
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Just to let you guys know this isn't my eye... |
| On July 4th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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I love this poem and it is truly beautiful when you desbribe her sorrowfulness. It is just...beautiful poem. |
| On July 4th 2008 deadpoet Said : | |
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very well written, and creative |
| On July 4th 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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wow, i love everything about it.Deep and emotional...Is that you eyes.Tha is just beauuuuutiful.plenty beautiful |
| On July 4th 2008 TheBranster Said : | |
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well.... on the up-side, nice eyeball. and great poem about it |


