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it's not about me......

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Blue.

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As the saints go marching

In the grand parade,

She just sits there watching

Her life float away.

How can she let this happen?

How can she just not see,

The things that are affecting

Her originality.

Words cause her pain

She consumes like air.

She has nothing left to gain

Because nothing is fair.

Why is all this happening?

She wonders till this day,

Things come and go

But this seems to stay.

All the things that made her happy

Make her sad and blue.

Depression comes more and more

And insecurity too.

She tries to keep it all inside

To appear as a normal child,

But all she does is try to hide

From  what she is and how she feels.

-Makenzie ( This is not me)

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On July 21st 2008 MCRsLover Said :
MCRsLover awesome!!
On July 7th 2008 JAiDyLeE Said :
JAiDyLeE Great poem. Thats a cool eye too.
On July 6th 2008 tibbskidoo Said :
tibbskidoo that is a cool eye tho! and the poem is good too ;)
On July 5th 2008 xXkenzieXz Said :
xXkenzieXz Just to let you guys know this isn't my eye...
On July 4th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx I love this poem and it is truly beautiful when you desbribe her sorrowfulness. It is just...beautiful poem.
On July 4th 2008 deadpoet Said :
deadpoet very well written, and creative
On July 4th 2008 kissofasia Said :
kissofasia wow, i love everything about it.Deep and emotional...Is that you eyes.Tha is just beauuuuutiful.plenty beautiful
On July 4th 2008 TheBranster Said :
TheBranster well.... on the up-side, nice eyeball. and great poem about it