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Created on 5-23-08
I see you in the distance but your to far ahead
Wishing you'd see me
Hoping you'd stop and talk to me
Is the easier part
the hard part is that I can't be there
to run my fingers through your hair
loving every part of you
never wishing harm
causing no sense of alarm
feeling no pain
caught up in the moment
loving every second
just being with you
is the best thing ever
forever shall we stay
this same exact way
until the end of our very last day
together forever
Wishing you'd see me
Hoping you'd stop and talk to me
Is the easier part
the hard part is that I can't be there
to run my fingers through your hair
loving every part of you
never wishing harm
causing no sense of alarm
feeling no pain
caught up in the moment
loving every second
just being with you
is the best thing ever
forever shall we stay
this same exact way
until the end of our very last day
together forever
Please Login to post comments| On May 29th 2008 MCRsLover Said : | |
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love it! |
| On May 24th 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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awwww,this is very sweet and i can feel the emotion. |
| On May 24th 2008 valiantvivian Said : | |
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Ok there is appsolutely nothing wrong with this poem I loved it! |
| On May 23rd 2008 Xpoetxgurlx Said : | |
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awwwwwwweeee. this is amazing. i L-O-V-E this one ^^ |
| On May 23rd 2008 TheBranster Said : | |
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sort of creepy in a way,lol. but nice poem, yessiry |
