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Running, running everywhere
Feeling the wind through my hair
In my own safe little world
Where nothing can be heard
Except the beating
The beating of my heart
And the tiredness doing it's part
Still continuing not caring
That the world doesn’t get my
Weird obsession of escape

Escaping the lie

That I am supposed to live
And never forgive……….

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On July 4th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx Lovely♥
I can relate this part of your poem.
On May 24th 2008 tibbskidoo Said :
tibbskidoo hey u wanted know if u poems suck so my answer is NO theyre actually really good ALL of themi wish i was as creative as u chica!
On May 24th 2008 kissofasia Said :
kissofasia this is very nice.i love it.
On May 23rd 2008 valiantvivian Said :
valiantvivian Ok but don't you think it'd be better to confront anything like that head on. Running makes it sound like your a wuss. But it's still not a bad poem I rather liked it actually.
On May 23rd 2008 Xpoetxgurlx Said :
Xpoetxgurlx this one is great! me likey!! keep it up gurlie!