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When i write what i feel.....
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Created on 5-23-08
When I write what I feel
Then I write about you
But all the things I write about you
Are all so confusing
Why can't it be easy to be apart from you
Or why do I feel such weird feelings towards you
When i am apart from you I feel like my heart has been ripped in two
I feel like another day won't come until i see your face
I feel feelings.... feelings that are new
Not the old same feelings I feel for somebody else
New ones
And with new ones comes thoughts
And with thoughts comes no sleep
All i am trying to say is that your driving me crazy
Crazy for you and your new feelings
Please Login to post comments| On May 24th 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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kmp........nicey nice to me |
| On May 23rd 2008 valiantvivian Said : | |
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Not bad but I don't understand why you need my approval for something like this? If you think it's good then it's good. Who cares what other people think. |
| On May 23rd 2008 valiantvivian Said : | |
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Not bad but I don't understand why you need my approval for something like this? If you think it's good then it's good. Who cares what other people think. |
| On May 23rd 2008 TheBranster Said : | |
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if i get new feelngs, i shoot them |
| On May 23rd 2008 Xpoetxgurlx Said : | |
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its not bad.. but with a bit of tweeking(sp?) it would be rather nice :] |
