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A Best Friend's mad at me...

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Breakdown

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Breakdown

Created by xXPunkGirl09Xx

 

Tonight is killing my heart into dust

All of the things I wish to go back

The tears are slipping away from the trust

Every day is getting rust

 

 

Every beat is slowly pounding against my chest on the inside

The pains grow bigger

The fluid liquid are trying to hide

I don't need a pride

 

 

I just need to be loved

I am breaking down

All of the things are shoved

You are beloved

To me

 

 

I love you

You might not understand me

I wish you can see my sign and, yeah, it's true

I am breaking down.

 

 

October 4, 2008

 

 

 ::I am sorry if this poem doesn't make a sense. Please be free to say any comment in here::

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On October 8th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x wow very nice.
On October 6th 2008 justjetjustis Said :
justjetjustis nice
On October 5th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx She stops being mad at me. I ask for her forgiveness so she did.
On October 5th 2008 flutytute Said :
flutytute This kind of matches my mood on friday. I hope your best friend stopped being mad at you =]
On October 5th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem They only part I do not get is "Everyday is getting rust." I guess that means that the world is still going on. Well thats how I look at it.
On October 4th 2008 rosebrugh Said :
rosebrugh doesnt make sense...but then again it does