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I Hate Myself
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Created on 8-22-08
I HATE MYSELF By xXPunkGirl09Xx I am sick and tired of your words to comfort me There is no way for me to stay positive anymore Look at me, look at my eyes to see The fears that create me to be enemy falling down on the floor Mirror, mirror is my nightmare You don't know me You only see my smile behind my makeups in no air I can't breath through lots of pains out of the blue You only see my smile while I am dying on the inside When I look at myself in the mirror I could see my bad side If you knew me, you would see me clearer Every time, I shed my tears of sorrow I never want to cry under my skin There is no way to get out of the darkness on the morrow There is no grin On my face Look at me There is some grace From my heart to see The sweet, pure heavens in the sky To be flying, flying Wishing to not cry I am trying to deserve through all the pains I go, but I am dying
I hate myself It's true I never want myself There are no lies behind my words August 22, 2008
Please Login to post comments| On August 29th 2008 ypod Said : | |
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the sad fate of pain, how you express yourself is very good. At some point we all hate ourselves, or maybe we just feel like we do, maybe there is something that clings on to use, just a thought. |
| On August 23rd 2008 mathstar Said : | |
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omgg very good poem. it is deep and powerful. I love your describition like other say. |
| On August 22nd 2008 brc93 Said : | |
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WOW!! That is amazingly deep. I love it. |
| On August 22nd 2008 suicidalcowgrl Said : | |
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Great job on the poem. I feel like that sometimes.
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| On August 22nd 2008 Shannonism374l Said : | |
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you can't hate yourself cuz you didnt do anythings in yourself, you're yourself who your person...we love you very much its great deep poem! |
| On August 22nd 2008 Foreverlyn Said : | |
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Deep! |
| On August 22nd 2008 justjetjustis Said : | |
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i feel like that sometimes :( - great job on the poem :) |
| On August 22nd 2008 Jabip14 Said : | |
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i know how you feel...great description of emotion |
| On August 22nd 2008 lolo456456456 Said : | |
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you shouldn't hate your self
you should love you and your life
everyone has those moments
i went through that too
but got over it
just go and talk to some one
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| On August 22nd 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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Don't hate yourself. Your a talented preety girl. Who see to have alot going for yourself. Go talk to a good friend and keep up with writing. Because it does help. |
| On August 22nd 2008 tiffany1058 Said : | |
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i know how you feel =( but great poem |
