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My Cinderella Story

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MY CINDERELLA STORY

 

 

Each time, I always wish to cry

I always create thousand excuses for me to lie

To my mother and sister with a strong hate

All I need a gate

 

 

To set myself free from that dull house with no soft, red hearts

I am feeling like I am part of Cinderella’s story and it starts

To go on and on

In my eighteen years, I need to be gone

 

 

Further and further away from my house

My house is no home to me to rouse

With an evil darkness

My own, biological mother never show me her sweetness

 

 

And love to me

I am fading to love her and it is time for me to flee

Someday

At once, I need someone for me to cry on the shoulder and let me stay

 

 

Anywhere but here

I hate breathing through Cinderella’s old days in my eighteen years

No prince for me

Someday, he will rescue me out of the boring house to flee

 

 

Away with him further and further in thousand miles

With a millions of beautiful smiles

All at once, I need to let my tears to vanish out of my eyes

With countless goodbyes

 

 

Is anyone there out to save me?

Help me, help me

I need a pure air to breathe throughout

Let me shout

 

 

Help me, help me

Please, please, set me free

 

July 23, 2008

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On July 26th 2008 mathstar Said :
mathstar woww definetely good poem. i love it how you describe it
On July 24th 2008 justjetjustis Said :
justjetjustis kewl
On July 24th 2008 depressionsux6 Said :
depressionsux6 i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!
On July 23rd 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem I love it! Good work! :)
On July 23rd 2008 jabip15 Said :
jabip15 Wow this is good!
On July 23rd 2008 futureguy95 Said :
futureguy95 really good
On July 23rd 2008 xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Said :
xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Wow..it really perfect to shannon's life! Wow.I love it! :]
On July 23rd 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx This ain't about me but this is about my friend who lives through her years.