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The Way You Do To Me

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THE WAY YOU DO TO ME

 

 

Since your hand touched my neck playfully

You squeaked my neck hurtfully

All of the thoughts inside your mind were empty

Without thinking of my broken soul, why?

 

 

Suddenly, my anger burned on the inside

I grasped your strong hands away from my neck, isn't it your pride?

My power, hatred words flew out of my voice

It was my choice

 

 

To speak out of my heart

I hate your game tonight, and it broke my golden soul apart

What the heck is matter with you?

I am sick and tired of you tonight out of the blue

 

 

I cannot realize why you had done to me

The darkness came in my deep, darkened soul once again, will it flee?

I was astonished of myself

To punch your face difficult, and it was how fool of myself!

 

 

I never wanted it again

It happens to gain a pain

Deep, deep inside my black soul

A thousand, thousand of holes

 

 

On my heart, it screams out of the pain

Take me out to the rain

Wishing none of this thing to occur once more

Falling my knees to the floor

 

 

Million of tears fell over my face

Upon a star, I wish to replace

Myself of a perfect girl

But I hate you to hurl

 

 

My heart into a dust

A trust

Gone

My forgone

 

 

Memories with you scream in my mind

The whispering wind

Around me

Letting my tears flee

 

 

July 21, 2008

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On July 26th 2008 mathstar Said :
mathstar oh woww. you have goood talents! you have teach me someday. like tutor. haha. this is deep and powerful
On July 24th 2008 CSLimeWriter Said :
CSLimeWriter A little confusing; but it's good. Love your backdrop, too
On July 21st 2008 jabip15 Said :
jabip15 it's deep.i can relate.
On July 21st 2008 xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Said :
xXEmoxGirlx3Xx wow i like it but what this poem talk about? who?
On July 21st 2008 iluvqueen Said :
iluvqueen i can relate.huhuhu
On July 21st 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem Aww it will be ok! Nice poem! :)
On July 21st 2008 justjetjustis Said :
justjetjustis ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh... thats sad ... its so deep .. loved it ^^