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A poem to someone who hurt me...Rate this Poem
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All The Memories |
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Do Not Give Me |
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I Don't Really Understand |
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I Miss You |
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Nicole |
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Our Friendship Is Almost Fading |
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Our Own World |
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Secret |
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Another |
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Free |
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Hate & Love |
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Queen of Liars |
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Too Many |
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Your Jokes Crack Our Hearts Open |
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The Way You Do To Me
THE WAY YOU DO TO ME
Since your hand touched my neck playfully You squeaked my neck hurtfully All of the thoughts inside your mind were empty Without thinking of my broken soul, why? Suddenly, my anger burned on the inside I grasped your strong hands away from my neck, isn't it your pride? My power, hatred words flew out of my voice It was my choice To speak out of my heart I hate your game tonight, and it broke my golden soul apart What the heck is matter with you? I am sick and tired of you tonight out of the blue I cannot realize why you had done to me The darkness came in my deep, darkened soul once again, will it flee? I was astonished of myself To punch your face difficult, and it was how fool of myself! I never wanted it again It happens to gain a pain Deep, deep inside my black soul A thousand, thousand of holes On my heart, it screams out of the pain Take me out to the rain Wishing none of this thing to occur once more Falling my knees to the floor Million of tears fell over my face Upon a star, I wish to replace Myself of a perfect girl But I hate you to hurl My heart into a dust A trust Gone My forgone Memories with you scream in my mind The whispering wind Around me Letting my tears flee
July 21, 2008
| On July 26th 2008 mathstar Said : | |
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oh woww. you have goood talents! you have teach me someday. like tutor. haha. this is deep and powerful |
| On July 24th 2008 CSLimeWriter Said : | |
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A little confusing; but it's good. Love your backdrop, too |
| On July 21st 2008 jabip15 Said : | |
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it's deep.i can relate. |
| On July 21st 2008 xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Said : | |
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wow i like it but what this poem talk about? who? |
| On July 21st 2008 iluvqueen Said : | |
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i can relate.huhuhu |
| On July 21st 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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Aww it will be ok! Nice poem! :) |
| On July 21st 2008 justjetjustis Said : | |
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ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh... thats sad ... its so deep .. loved it ^^ |


