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Poem to my older sisterRate this Poem
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All The Memories |
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Do Not Give Me |
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I Don't Really Understand |
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How Does It Feel?
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Created on 7-18-08
How Does It Feel? Oh, tonight is not my favorite night I always desire to be alright Tell me if it is okay Let your words say Because my heart is cracking into a dust What happened to my trust? It's all gone because of you My wings cannot be flying free Tell me if it is alright I hate having a fight Although you broke my heart I am feeling myself to be apart You don't understand how much I am feeling this way It is tearing me far away From my little, golden world Let my pain to be hurled In thousands miles away There are million things you may Not realize how much the pains grow deep inside of me It's better for me to be left alone, setting myself free Sister, I've always wanted to scream out of the pain Let the rain fall again Wishing all of the things you know about me I guess you will barely laughing it off, and disagree July 18, 2008
Please Login to post comments| On July 24th 2008 CSLimeWriter Said : | |
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Wow that's REALLY good!! |
| On July 18th 2008 Suburbia1992 Said : | |
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Hae this is really good it is totly me and my sis...good work.. |
| On July 18th 2008 glamourgore Said : | |
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Some of the rhymes sound forced and the tempo is off. Maybe you should try free verse. |
| On July 18th 2008 brek123 Said : | |
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prettty gooood! |
| On July 18th 2008 xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Said : | |
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ah did you show your sister about this poem?? ah i love it and i totally uddy how you feel! but it so good poem. |
| On July 18th 2008 jake189 Said : | |
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that was nice... in this story i guess i'm your sister... why? because i usually hate my brother so much... why again? too irresponsible... immature and what i hate the most? narrow minded... your poem is awesome... great job! |
| On July 18th 2008 mathstar Said : | |
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gosh. very deep and powerful. keep up |
| On July 18th 2008 rosebrugh Said : | |
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i am subscribing....and i like it |
| On July 18th 2008 halfemoon Said : | |
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It makes no sense, that's why it's great. |
| On July 18th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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It's preety good. Keep up the good work! :) |
| On July 18th 2008 justjetjustis Said : | |
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wow thats very deep ^^ |
| On July 18th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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I guess you will barely laughing it off, and disagree. It suppose to be laugh, not laughing. sorry. |
