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RIP to Patrick Nogueras (July 12, 2008)

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Broken Hours

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Broken Hours

A beautiful song of sorrow intones within your ears

It brings you a millions of tears

The pains strengthen deep down your souls

The countless holes

 

High-pitched voices

Limitless choices

Beautiful broken wings cannot fly anymore

Weeping on the floor

 

Seeing his lifeless face in your eyes

Abhorring many goodbyes

Thunderstruck words

The skies collect the birds

 

Waving at him a farewell

Your knees fell

Your hearts feel powerlessly

Today will never end to die

 

July 15, 2008

Author note: This poem is for my friends who are having a tragedy from their dad. RIP to Patrick Nogueras (July 12, 2008)

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On July 17th 2008 xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Said :
xXEmoxGirlx3Xx *sigh* i like it but very sad....*sniffe*
On July 16th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x very nice
On July 16th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 awesome job
On July 15th 2008 gusty13 Said :
gusty13 i lov eall your poems
On July 15th 2008 mathstar Said :
mathstar awww. i think we better not show steph and john. becaus they will broke heart again. but thank for posting anyway