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Just another pain, and love always suck

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Tears of Rain

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Every single day, my heart tries to push the pains with many bruises

Far, far away from me

I creates a million of excuses

To push my broken heart to set itself free

 

Even through there is no road to break myself free

Letting the rain sheds its tears to pour upon me

Let me wish upon a star to see a beautiful sea

My eyes tend to see

 

Many wounded bruises of mine on my broken soul

Looking for the star in the rain to wish something

To heal a black hole

Upon my sweet, broken heart, it stings

 

Lots of the pains

The past always tends to haunt me every way I go

Desiring someone special to hold me until a beginning of the rains

To show me one of his beautiful smile and say a hello

 

I hope that there will be no farewell

All because I want one and only true love to stay here forever

Without a grief pain, there will be no bell

To sing ever

 

No more for me

To drown into the tears of rain

Under the grave that will not set me free

Permitting myself to say a goodbye to a pain

 

July 3, 2008

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On July 17th 2008 xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Said :
xXEmoxGirlx3Xx mmm...wow it really good! and very very very SAD! but i always be here :D
On July 8th 2008 futureguy95 Said :
futureguy95 very very good, but very sad
On July 4th 2008 justjetjustis Said :
justjetjustis wow its very good kmp on anything new please ^_^
On July 4th 2008 xXkenzieXz Said :
xXkenzieXz this is really good..i love how you talked about rain mixed w/ sadness.........it beautiful.
On July 3rd 2008 VickyLubDanii Said :
VickyLubDanii Wheres the tissues ?
On July 3rd 2008 mysterywhateve Said :
mysterywhateve Very good! I like your style of writing!
On July 3rd 2008 rosebrugh Said :
rosebrugh you dont have to worry about me hating it
On July 3rd 2008 coreenaphare Said :
coreenaphare wow thats really deep i love it...
On July 3rd 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx Haters are not welcome here, thanks, but to lovers, please, r/r/c! And, thank you!