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Kisses of the Rain

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Since the summer is beginning

The tears of the rain are flooding above us

Walking under the rain down the road

The clouds are creating a blackness

Slowly, the thunderstorms are touching down on the ground

Keeping my chocolate eyes on the clouds within a taste of the rain

My heart pulses thunderously

My legs are starting to escape to my house

Many thoughts are weighting my soul down

To the fire and ice at the same time

Deep inside, I am left out alone

All because my friends are not here anymore

I am trying to survive through this deal

The drop of the rain kisses my tongue

My voice whisperes,

"I miss y'all!"

My heart beat slowly to the dead world

Calming myself down

It is only the summertime begun

Waiting for the summer to end

 

June 30, 2008

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On July 17th 2008 xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Said :
xXEmoxGirlx3Xx ah...i miss you......I LOVE IT!
On July 7th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x exactly, why all the haters? This is one of my favorite poems. Keep up the amazing work! :)
On June 30th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx Well, don't you understand, haters? THIS IS BULLCRAP!! Okay, enough of negative comments! This is about my work, not my personal life!
On June 30th 2008 zfreak Said :
zfreak It's unfortunate that we have to have haters leaving comments when it's obvious they don't have enough intelligence to appreciate and understand a brilliant poem like yours. I thought it was genious..don't worry about the haters..I myself have recieved negative comments I just wipe my ass with them..I love your poetry keep up the brilliance!
On June 30th 2008 whitneyann95 Said :
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stupid stupid and why dont u call or hitch hike to go see ur friens!!! wah wah cry me a river
On June 30th 2008 whitneyann95 Said :
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wow thats stupd