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Water drowns me down under, and slowly..Rate this Poem
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All The Memories |
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Do Not Give Me |
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I Don't Really Understand |
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I Miss You |
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Nicole |
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Our Friendship Is Almost Fading |
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Our Own World |
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Secret |
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Another |
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Free |
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Hate & Love |
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Queen of Liars |
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Too Many |
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Your Jokes Crack Our Hearts Open |
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Eyes |
Under the Deep
Under the Deep
The deep drowns me under
Screaming for a help
The deep continues to thunder
Below, and the sounds of my voice yelp
How come I become an invisible?
My heart is breathing less without an air?
Why is the world is being unfair?
All I want my prayer
To answer me in my mind
Without love, I will be lost
Although my eyes may be blind
Under the deep, I am covering with frost
There is nothing I can do
I just endure falling onto the sea floor
My heart pulses to the death out of the blue
Once more
My smile leaves you
With a voiceless words
"I love you, but find a true
Love lead you, you lover bird."
There is only a heart
Left for you and only you
For me, I am better off apart
From you, fool
The tears are a desired goal for me
To weep into a flood
I will know when I will be free
Refreshing my innocent, pure blood
I guess this is a farewell, boy
I have a warning
To say about a love
If you come to me, darling
I will handle you a half of my heart
Beware of it
I will not desire it apart
Because I won't want my world to split
May 14, 2008
| On June 8th 2008 CSLimeWriter Said : | |
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I liked your rhyming scheme at the beginning; but near the end it was constantly changing. Other than that it was cool |


