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Since You've Been Gone

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Everything slowly becomes different since you’ve been gone

Although I still miss your sweet barks

I don’t care what people says

If I should let you go out of my mind

I would not listen to their comments

I am sick and tired of their fool comments

Although you are gone all the ways since last year

Bad memories, sometimes, make me laugh out loud

I remember you ruin my homework

You almost ruin my shoes

You almost ruin everything in the house

Every time, I punish you

I see your eyes were covered by your paws

With a sound of whining

I never forget your eyes of grief

When I see inside your eyes

It brings me an invisible tear

I know

I made every single mistake

Nobody is without their own faults

Without errors

Every wonderful memory with you,

I smiled when your tail happily wagged

You always jump onto me every time

When I get home in front of the door

I never forget every moment

Of your happiness

I miss you

Since you’ve been gone

 

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On May 2nd 2008 jwoody1980 Said :
my picture
same thing its ok could use a little rewording and i hear ya about the whole edit thing
On May 1st 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x I can relate to this... nice job!
On April 30th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx Sorry about my verb tense but dang this testriffic doesn't have edit. Whatever ookay, enjoy my poem! Please give your honest opinion about this and explain why or not. Thanks