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It Hurts 2 B Me.....

Views (589) Pain Created on 6-4-07 Flag
it hurts 2 breath, I'm scared 2 luv. I no I'm not listening 2 the u say 2 me 'cause every time i cry u just smile and walk away. I was back then and still am I'll never find the light at the end. 2 hard 2 breath now I can't love at all. it hutrs so much 2 b me and u wont see the marks on my body. i won't attempt 2 breath now because i no i can't.my heart iz gone and my mind iz blank. and u r 2 thank.......4 my death anyway.
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On January 24th 2008 fawzia11 Said :
fawzia11 This poem is brilliant!
On June 22nd 2007 emofreakrox Said :
emofreakrox this is really good!
On June 16th 2007 Emorose666 Said :
Emorose666 hey sophie, this iz good!
On June 15th 2007 NaomiElizabeth Said :
NaomiElizabeth Good writing I like it.
On June 12th 2007 steviestuds Said :
steviestuds love it
On June 12th 2007 100106manda91 Said :
100106manda91 i like it, great stuff comes from the heart.
On June 10th 2007 guffa78 Said :
guffa78 coolness... great poem. we all have our own pains....no one knows them but ourselves
On June 7th 2007 xXFireFairyxX Said :
xXFireFairyxX that peom is bloody brilliant!(puma wilderness)
On June 5th 2007 xXFARYLUVXx Said :
xXFARYLUVXx no 1 feels tha pain that makes me cry even when i'm @ my happiest moments.
On June 4th 2007 Lorna16 Said :
Lorna16 i really like this. it has alot of meaning. alot of feeling. it's brilliant. if this is how you feel. we feel the same way. brilliant poem. x
On June 4th 2007 xXFARYLUVXx Said :
xXFARYLUVXx part of it is gone in the begining its supposed 2 be I NO I'M NOT LISTENING2 THE "WORDS"U SAY....