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Drowning Souls
I was beautiful, and virtuous so naive.
I was taken away by you, and held in your hellish captivity.
I fell so hard, I was lost, and oh so beautiful.
After so long of your harsh mockery, I told myself to tke it!
The poison arsinic that could save me, olny to that it would betray me.
Now you've let me go. Am I not beautiful? Am I not virtuouse? But I am naive.
I walk to the shores, in hope that the fallen and poor will take me.
I walk along the peir, in my silent fear, being shunned even by them.
I see the water it's deep coldness filling my heart, this will be my end.
| On January 24th 2008 fawzia11 Said : | |
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Awesome! |
| On January 21st 2008 XxXkillinMeXxX Said : | |
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this is really good |
| On January 21st 2008 stics917 Said : | |
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nice dude |
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Amazing! |


