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A naive young girl.

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Drowning Souls

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I was beautiful, and virtuous so naive.

I was taken away by you, and held in your hellish captivity.

I fell so hard, I was lost, and oh so beautiful.

After so long of your harsh mockery, I told myself to tke it!

The poison arsinic that could save me, olny to that it would betray me.

Now you've let me go. Am I not beautiful? Am I not virtuouse? But I am naive.

I walk to the shores, in hope that the fallen and poor will take me.

I walk along the peir, in my silent fear, being shunned even by them.

I see the water it's deep coldness filling my heart, this will be my end.

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On January 24th 2008 fawzia11 Said :
fawzia11 Awesome!
On January 21st 2008 XxXkillinMeXxX Said :
XxXkillinMeXxX this is really good
On January 21st 2008 stics917 Said :
stics917 nice dude
On January 21st 2008 transgenic Said :
transgenic Amazing!