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Created:
07/17 2008
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Category:
Love
My Poems
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ThUnDeRsToRm! |
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My brain have NO clue!! |
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in Dream |
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You make me smile |
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i dont know... |
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I want you to listen to me! |
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Leave me alone! |
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i can't wait for something... |
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Where is Moon? |
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Vent Out of Angry in My Body. |
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Best Friends are Together |
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His name |
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I wont give you |
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why? |
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Tell me if you love me |
A Wounded Heart
My heart was opened and wounded.
It was bleeding so badly.
I thought it would be continuing.
I was stuck in an evil darkness
In a horror chamber (it means room).
I wanted to fix my heart.
Although that boy stabbed my heart so deep
it make my heart to be opened.
The knife was still in my wound heart.
I was praying that I can find a right guy
Who can take care of my wound heart.
I never gave up to pray to look for a right guy
Since December or January.
I found two boys.
But they didn't take care of my wounded heart.
I wouldn't give up to pray to look for right guy.
My heart was in a deep wound
It bleed so badly.
I put a clown smile on my face
To show my friends that I was happy.
But inside of me, I was sad.
I never gave up to pray to look for right guy
Who can take care of my wounded heart.
Around in July, I think I found a right guy.
That I finally told guy that I like him.
He told me that he do like me.
Few hours later, he told me
That he want to say three words
But he said that it was too early for say that words.
My wounded heart told me to not fall love with him, yet.
I being to pray that I hope
That guy would take care of my wounded heart.
Few hours later, he asked me
If we can date to get knowing other each.
My wounded heart told me to not fell love with him, yet.
And said that I can date him.
My heart was still wounded and opened
And it still bleed so badly.
Few days later, he told me
About his past that
It used to be in a darkness
I can tell that his heart was wounded and opened
And it bleed so badly.
But my wounded heart told me to not fall in love with him, yet!
Few weeks later, he asked me
To be his girlfriend.
I asked my wounded heart if he can have me.
My wounded heart said that he can
But still said that I can't fall in love with him, yet.
That day on July 7, 2008, I told him yes.
My heart was still wounded and opened
And bleed so badly.
I never gave up to pray
That he would take care of my wounded heart!
And I will take care of his wounded heart.
My wounded heart told me to not fall in love with him, yet!
Few week later, he showed me of his poem.
I, my wounded heart, read his poem.
He prove it that he truly love me
My wounded heart told me that I can fall in love with him.
So I gave him a my wound heart.
He pulled the knife out of my would heart.
It stopped to bleed.
And he make it to be closed once again.
The wound was gone.
I can feel a beat in my heart.
I started to write a poem for him.
That I wanted to tell him
That I love him.
I showed him of my poem.
He finally let me fix his wound heart.
Now, we don't have to smile like a clown
Because we don't feel sadness inside of our feelings!
We feel so love and happy with other each.
I grabbed his hand.
I asked him if he is ready!
So we are ready to escape from the darkness!
To find a bright place
Where we are belong to love.
Our hearts are not wounded, anymore.
Because we care about each other
And promise to each other that we can't break our hearts.
Now, I begin to pray that we can continue to be together.
We are truly in love other each
It was bleeding so badly.
I thought it would be continuing.
I was stuck in an evil darkness
In a horror chamber (it means room).
I wanted to fix my heart.
Although that boy stabbed my heart so deep
it make my heart to be opened.
The knife was still in my wound heart.
I was praying that I can find a right guy
Who can take care of my wound heart.
I never gave up to pray to look for a right guy
Since December or January.
I found two boys.
But they didn't take care of my wounded heart.
I wouldn't give up to pray to look for right guy.
My heart was in a deep wound
It bleed so badly.
I put a clown smile on my face
To show my friends that I was happy.
But inside of me, I was sad.
I never gave up to pray to look for right guy
Who can take care of my wounded heart.
Around in July, I think I found a right guy.
That I finally told guy that I like him.
He told me that he do like me.
Few hours later, he told me
That he want to say three words
But he said that it was too early for say that words.
My wounded heart told me to not fall love with him, yet.
I being to pray that I hope
That guy would take care of my wounded heart.
Few hours later, he asked me
If we can date to get knowing other each.
My wounded heart told me to not fell love with him, yet.
And said that I can date him.
My heart was still wounded and opened
And it still bleed so badly.
Few days later, he told me
About his past that
It used to be in a darkness
I can tell that his heart was wounded and opened
And it bleed so badly.
But my wounded heart told me to not fall in love with him, yet!
Few weeks later, he asked me
To be his girlfriend.
I asked my wounded heart if he can have me.
My wounded heart said that he can
But still said that I can't fall in love with him, yet.
That day on July 7, 2008, I told him yes.
My heart was still wounded and opened
And bleed so badly.
I never gave up to pray
That he would take care of my wounded heart!
And I will take care of his wounded heart.
My wounded heart told me to not fall in love with him, yet!
Few week later, he showed me of his poem.
I, my wounded heart, read his poem.
He prove it that he truly love me
My wounded heart told me that I can fall in love with him.
So I gave him a my wound heart.
He pulled the knife out of my would heart.
It stopped to bleed.
And he make it to be closed once again.
The wound was gone.
I can feel a beat in my heart.
I started to write a poem for him.
That I wanted to tell him
That I love him.
I showed him of my poem.
He finally let me fix his wound heart.
Now, we don't have to smile like a clown
Because we don't feel sadness inside of our feelings!
We feel so love and happy with other each.
I grabbed his hand.
I asked him if he is ready!
So we are ready to escape from the darkness!
To find a bright place
Where we are belong to love.
Our hearts are not wounded, anymore.
Because we care about each other
And promise to each other that we can't break our hearts.
Now, I begin to pray that we can continue to be together.
We are truly in love other each
Please Login to post comments| On May 9th 2009 nigachan Said: |
| u r good, i really like this one |
| On July 20th 2008 CRISSY10012 Said: |
| i like this one the best |
| On July 19th 2008 Andy2Anomaly Said: |
| I like it alot :) |
| On July 17th 2008 mathstar Said: |
| awwwwww. cuteee poem. and wowwwww greg is ur hero. make ur heart better. and u r his hero! |
| On July 17th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said: |
| Love this poem but fyi, it almost make me cry! I love this poem ever |
| On July 17th 2008 mathstar Said: |
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| goshhh sooo goood poem. I love it. and I glad that I fix ur wonded heart. you fix mine too. irlysmffl |
