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I love you

Views (107) Love Created on 7-16-08 Flag

You make my heart to melt
When I hear you say, "I love you"
In early week.
My heart is skipping a beat.
My heart is red and soft.
Your heart is black and stone.
But our hearts are together
That I make your heart to be red and soft.
Don't let our hearts to be apart
Because it would be black and stone once.
there is a chain,
it wraps around our hearts
To make us stay together.
If someone tries to break us apart.
So they can't
Because they don't have a key
We truly love other each.
Let us continue loving each other,
Please don't stop it.
Because I love you, sweetie!

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On July 24th 2008 CSLimeWriter Said :
CSLimeWriter It's a little confusing but cute
On July 21st 2008 ewaers Said :
ewaers love it
On July 20th 2008 CRISSY10012 Said :
CRISSY10012 aww sooo cute and really good love it
On July 17th 2008 mathstar Said :
mathstar goshhhhh goood poem and cutee it make me tear because you date my bro.
On July 17th 2008 ewaers Said :
ewaers damn that was so good i had to comment it twice
On July 17th 2008 ewaers Said :
ewaers tear lol loved it
On July 16th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx Aww you make Greg cry but that's so cute!
On July 16th 2008 mathstar Said :
mathstar ily my sweetie. it makeme tear again
On July 16th 2008 Andy2Anomaly Said :
Andy2Anomaly This is really sweet :]
On July 16th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx Love this poem, my bestie! This is the best poem I ever read! ;)