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Created:
04/02 2008
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176
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Vent Out of Angry in My Body.
Hit Hit Hit the ball
Hit Hit Hit the ball
The bat are on my hands
I tight the bat
But I keep think that I don't have bat
I keep think "hand, hand, hand, hand!"
I stare at the pitcher
I gave pitcher a dirty face with mad expression
The pitcher starts to throw ball
I get ready to swing it
The ball is coming toward to me
I start to swing it my hands are straight to the ball
Where my bat connect the ball
And i hit the ball so hard
The ball flies up
The ball over the frence
I feel so good when i hited the ball
Hit hit hit the ball
Hit hit hit the ball
i know that poem was weird....but it is so OLD poem like last year, i know it suck of poem which i hate it but i just show you guys. yea
| On April 26th 2008 AnimaniacAsh Said: |
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| COOL!!!!
-Ash |
| On April 13th 2008 JasonEmoKid Said: |
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| haha its kinda catthy and cute [x |
| On April 13th 2008 XxbloodstainxX Said: |
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| I wouldn't call it "weird" but unique, unusal from most poems you'd read. |
| On April 10th 2008 mathstar Said: |
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| I think it is good but not weird. I love it how u expressing |


