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Vent Out of Angry in My Body.

Views (78) Other Created on 4-2-08 Flag

Hit Hit Hit the ball
Hit Hit Hit the ball
The bat are on my hands
I tight the bat
But I keep think that I don't have bat
I keep think "hand, hand, hand, hand!"
I stare at the pitcher
I gave pitcher a dirty face with mad expression
The pitcher starts to throw ball
I get ready to swing it
The ball is coming toward to me
I start to swing it my hands are straight to the ball
Where my bat connect the ball
And i hit the ball so hard
The ball flies up
The ball over the frence
I feel so good when i hited the ball
Hit hit hit the ball
Hit hit hit the ball

 

 

i know that poem was weird....but it is so OLD poem like last year, i know it suck of poem which i hate it but i just show you guys. yea

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On April 26th 2008 AnimaniacAsh Said :
AnimaniacAsh COOL!!!! -Ash
On April 13th 2008 JasonEmoKid Said :
JasonEmoKid haha its kinda catthy and cute [x
On April 13th 2008 XxbloodstainxX Said :
XxbloodstainxX I wouldn't call it "weird" but unique, unusal from most poems you'd read.
On April 10th 2008 mathstar Said :
mathstar I think it is good but not weird. I love it how u expressing